Reviews for God's Monologue
Lucca Ashtear chapter 1 . 7/11/2006
Wow. Thought-provoking... Authentic too. For what this poem is, it's really something (If that makes any sense). It would be a cool apocalypse poem, if you were to extend it a little. Like "The Day After Tomorrow". I see a lot of potential.
2ndhandguitar chapter 1 . 4/1/2006
"While Man spread like a disease."


That was very interesting. I often think of what he thinks of us myself. -.-
THE LAST zHERO chapter 1 . 3/31/2006
scary thoughts! chilling and great.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/30/2006
try to write about more cheerful things instead of always focusing on how we kill everything. there are people that are trying to fix things, you know. the least you could do would be to say "some of Man" instead of "Man" because we aren't ALL bad.

otherwise, good poem.
heartbroken922 chapter 1 . 3/30/2006
I really like your poem. Its totally true about how God created this world and here we are destroying. You really made me think about keeping this Earth clean and protecting it. Thanks.
Stories-have-souls chapter 1 . 3/30/2006
I meant to say "upon this world", not "open this world" in the summary, sorry!