Reviews for Daddy's Girl
Kylana chapter 1 . 5/24/2006
Great job.I like this. Its so emotional. You broke boundries I've just figured out how to tear down in your it up. :D
Lovetress chapter 1 . 4/10/2006
My situation isnt quite as bad, but I can definitely relate. The anger and bitterness were well expressed, but at time a little over the top. Some parts left me hanging, like "I wont give you the satisfaction of owning me for the rest of your life". i think the poem would be more powerful if it were longer.
mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 3/30/2006
dark and rather emotional... good work

keep writing!
Liliot chapter 1 . 3/30/2006
Daddy's girl... God I'm such a pervert. Anyway, pretty powerful piece here. The "daddy" in question sounds like a bastard, and I hope things improve for you if this is about you.
Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 3/30/2006
Woah, powerful! I can really feel the emotion in this. Well done, and keep writing!