Reviews for Orichalcum
Counting Petals chapter 1 . 7/18/2008
The first bit, before the actual story started, reminded me of a history textbook, and while I'm all for history textbooks...not in my leisure reading, please. ;) I dunno, it just seemed like you dumped a whole bunch of information on us at once, is all.
Valac chapter 5 . 5/15/2008
Update soon...This is really good.
Valac chapter 2 . 5/11/2008
Valac chapter 1 . 5/8/2008
Wow, this is so good.
Velcra chapter 1 . 10/11/2006
I think this is awesome so far, keep up the good work.
Adaku chapter 1 . 3/31/2006
wow...that this is great story so far. I really want to know who it turns out.

Though, you do have some grammer mistakes here and there, but that can be fixed by revising. It's ok, i'm not as good with grammer myself.