|Reviews for Shattering Control|
| a lonely september chapter 1 . 6/2/2006
this sounded like it was going to be really sad from the first stanza & stuff and in a way it kinda still is sad, but the third stanza lightening things up... this was well written tho...
| Mephistophelian chapter 1 . 4/29/2006
all your work is very powerful, this one is particularly striking. Not only is the subject matter refreshingly origional, but the rhyme and the meter are perfect. I read it aloud, it just sounds so cool! You have a few typos but nothing major, otherwise it's perfect.
Thanks for sharing!