Reviews for And They Clashed Again
Ky-Ky Apocalypse chapter 1 . 5/8/2006
I have to say, this is one of my favorites. I loved the feel of it, and how it flowed so easily. Great work!
Brinneh chapter 1 . 3/31/2006
Great message, and very well written. There is only one thing I would criticize, and it's a general one at that: I know it's difficult to rhyme at certain times, but make sure you don't add lines just so you can keep the pattern going. This is so slight that I'm tempted not to mention it, but I will anyways...the lines that made me think of it were these: "I could not see anything at all/ I did not hear a sound." Maybe it was just the phrasing of it, I don't know, but those lines sound forced. I'd revisit them, just a minor touch-up would do the garbage being said, great poem! Very motivational.
Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 3/31/2006
Well said. Good poem. Write on!