Reviews for Origami Bird
dancingintherain chapter 1 . 8/15/2006
wow the haikus nd the rhyming...it was just done very well! i love the imagery and creative language- nice job!
Rob Roy '03 chapter 1 . 8/10/2006
Hey, thanks for your review.

Now, on to your poem: It's beautiful, particularly the opening stanza(?); it conveys a profoundly deep connection in a beautiful way. The second and third underline the connection, while emphasising distance - the missing immediacy of the connection is lamented perfectly ("Among a barren garden"), but the "palms reaching skyward" reflect a beautiful optimism all the same. A beautiful, powerful poem, excellently written.
The Postscript chapter 1 . 8/8/2006
Beautiful poems. These haikus are connected flawlessly. The language is gentle and exquisite. Amazing work. Keep writing, s.
The Fourth Fate chapter 1 . 4/2/2006
Aww! I'm such a sap for love poems. I love it. So sweet and romancey. Love it to pieces.
Dale Christopher chapter 1 . 4/1/2006
Very beautiful use of words. Very poetic. I love it. Though I'd imagine you'd be better of just giving it to the person in question.

Peace, Daze
devilseyes chapter 1 . 4/1/2006
I love it.I really like the first 3 lines. There my favorite.
breezy nostrils chapter 1 . 4/1/2006
short and sweet and start to the point. great work.