Reviews for Dead Ringer
Storysmith chapter 2 . 4/2/2006
Okay, before I continue reading and invest any more time in this, are you going to finish this?I am a bit peeved that you posted all that in What You Can't See only to drop and decide not to continue it. I understand you want to be published, but that's a bit inconsiderate.I the same thing's going to happen here, I don't want to get engrossed again. That being said, I thought this was a very intriquing plot. A few places were a bit awkward. The whole owning people dilemna, it just didn't flow. And I think the letter would add to it if it were included. But it does seem very interesting. And I would like to read more. But I'd kinda like to read it all. You could always remove it later for publication sake. Sorry if I sound a bit angry, I kinda am. More aggravated really. But this is very good. The characters are awesome. Well, later!

earlkgm chapter 2 . 4/2/2006
good story so far... please update soon! Can't wait to read the next chapter...
Bloody Penhand chapter 1 . 4/1/2006
This is absolutely amazing - I was taken in by the first line. No critiques; just write the next chapter when you can get the time.
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