Reviews for The Annihilation |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I like Salene, but iw ould like her to talk more! This is really good, please update soon! |
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![]() ![]() On Hold? I ever went back and reread chapter three so I'd remember everything and then I get to this chapter...and it says on hold..I'm so sad now...I was so excited... |
![]() ![]() ![]() no, salene isn't coming out annoying. what you might want to do is put a bit more of her thoughts, maybe? if you want to portray her character more. the way she comes out is timid, hurt, scared, shy, and a person that keeps to themself. i love the story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() salene isnt annoying. from the way i see her, shes a quiet loving person who cant really open up to anybody yet :) cant wait for next chapter. |
![]() ![]() this is great. i love your writing style. and slaene is not annyoing, she just makes you feel kind of sorry for her and wish that her llife was easier. lovely story, update soon! |
![]() ![]() You know, I think I read this chapter write after I read the other one but for some reason I didn't review...So now I can't figure out what I was doing... anyway...How cute is he...All chivalrous and everything...Who cares if it's all for the bet it's still cute...I actually know a guy named Riley who's just like that... |
![]() ![]() ![]() You need to keep your classes consistent, and i know i can't spell so don't expect me to offer much of that kind of help. Great start to your story. I'll be waiting for more. Majigney-Foofoo |
![]() ![]() I love stories with bets in them...They're always interesting.. |
![]() ![]() salene is almost like my cuz... lol shes not very talkative and her mom pays more attention to her younger sis.. lol and salenes mom is a real biatch ... lol please update though cause i really like your writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I kind of like how Salene is turning out. It makes since the way she turns out. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Woo~~ I love Salene and her family problems. . . well it's a bad thing but I'm happy how this story is plotted, xD She seems too. . . giving herself. I was a bit shocked by the fact, quiet people usually deny/object to everything, but they can always be like Salene, right? :] overall, I really liked it |
![]() ![]() ![]() yea she is annoying but only because she's so quiet. but its good like that. its a kind of annoying that u want her just to stand up for herself and she won' not too short. ) cant wait for more Bamboti |
![]() ![]() ![]() Woah, I really like this. Salene reminds me of a character in an anime that I used to watch. But anyways, I really like this story. I cant wait for more, so you must update :) I like your writing style, and the story is really interesting too. Keep it up. Keep writing ~Rhia |
![]() ![]() ![]() really good start! i like your characters... the only thing i have a question about is salene's first class was science, right? then why did the teacher say they were writing poems? o well, it doenst really matter. i cant wait for the next chapter! |