The imagery is spectacular. The comparisons and symbolisms work well due to your chosen words. The second to the last line added an air of humor in it.

FANTASTIC I LOVED. BY THE WAY EDAWARD SCISSOR HAND IS ALSO ONE OF MY FAVOURITE FILMS.

This is nice. I like how you described silent things with sounds or by comparing them to things that make sounds. That really gets your point and the feeling across to the reader. Really nicely done.

Keep writing

~Rhia

i like the imagery and espeically the part toward the end about the moon. great work.

Beautiful - this speaks in such a peaceful way. Keep writing, s.