Reviews for Her mistake
AllyCred chapter 1 . 4/13/2006
WOW...OMG...this is so powerful and just amazing. The thoughts running through this are so deep and just so sad. I really love it and this is one of my favourite pieces ever, well done, this is phenomenal! Great Job!

Love You xx
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 4/7/2006
intersting.. not your best, but still good.. I like the short lines a lot
lordelfy chapter 1 . 4/5/2006
i really like this, "...underneath the clothes she wears. No one knows what she just did..." That was my favorite part. I think it just ties the whole poem together! great job!
Infection chapter 1 . 4/2/2006
this was superbly written.
queenvixta chapter 1 . 4/2/2006
Wow this is amazing! It's so powerful and beautfifully written. Great work! V x
xoxoMizzatxoxo chapter 1 . 4/1/2006
Amazing. I love the mystery.
simply meg chapter 1 . 4/1/2006
Hmm... fits very nicely, no work needed. It should be published just the way it is.
Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 4/1/2006
Wow! Excellent work! Keep writing! *applaudes*!

~Anna~ _