|Reviews for Defy|
| CovinS chapter 1 . 7/8/2006
Not bad at all. However, don't force rhymes; it takes away from the feeling and makes it technical.
two typos I believe: 1) "I fall in love && I fall out"
and 2) "To loves gravity" (To lose gravity?)
Decent piece otherwise. :)
| Neverlander12 chapter 1 . 4/3/2006
It's like WHOAH- that's me!...in a way. The middle part mostly. I love it! Awesome.