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THIS IS AMAZING KEEP WRITING PLEASE!

aw, so cute

AWESOME

I'm absolutely in love with this tory!

xx

Ali

i'm totally hooked

um scotts pretty dumb

if he wants her to love him shouldnt he not be mean to her and then go and kiss her?

but hey iono she likes it

m ionno everything is happening so fast..

i like it but i think it'd be better if you describe things more

if it isn't done, please updtae! this chapter and the chapter where he played the guitar in his room singing the song both made me cry. I have fallen in love with Scottie too hottie with the muscular body, and I wish to be his beccalynn. BTW, good move on the abnormal name. Unique is always the way to go.

AH! The Used is my fav band! I love this chapter and how they got stuck in an elevator together. Its so cute!

Wow, this was sort of cheezy...

This is like the second day they met and already he's like, 'muaha, you're gon' fall for me.'

Very realistic...

I'll tell you how it progresses.

I wish my nickname was Wolverine though...

wow i love this

Amber

Okay at first I thought 'I can't believe this! How could you have him not love her?'

Now I totally love you! haha. yay they are finally together! It's about time. D D D

haha I love X-men, so I totally guessed that Scott went as Cyclops Scott. p and Logan is of course Logan Wolverine. Nice.

Just wanted to say at the end of chapter three you said he called her Beccalyn? do you mean when he shouted at her, because on the phone he called her Wolverine.

Anywho, I love it. )

IOWA! i was born there, jesus, i get super happy when i hear about it.

haha.

anyways, i just finished reading this chapter, and it was really good.

:)

update?