Goodness I haven't been around here in a while! My apologies for being so slow...I remember when this happened :) you were talking about the puppies :) anyway I like the t.o.g.e.t.h.e.r stuff. i usually don't like it but it fit really well in this piece.

Less than brilliant? Not moving? No way. I love this. And I can super super super relate to it, too. Actually it's alot like what happened to me and this guy and now... Well I guess you could call it happily ever after (or at least until the summer comes). Anyway, the use of periods and such... it was used perfectly in this poem. I love love love this poem to pieces. Bravo. The end was so sweet and I loved it and the summary was great. I have such trouble with summaries. It always makes me happy to find someone who's good with them... Yeah so great job.

I understand how much you have to let that out. I did enjoy reading this. It made me think of so many others things that are on my mind. This is really sweet though.

SMILES ;)

~XoXo~

I think it's brilliant. All your stuff is brilliant.

You asked me if I misspokeAnd in an act of bravery-oh i really like this

it is one of things that warms you heartand makes you think

is here.

Your work has honesty and integrity. It seems that, as you approach quandaries, you are inviting us into your thought process. It took courage to verbally express your feelings; it is equally brave to put your thoughts on the Web. Peace.