Reviews for Truth
castelgard chapter 1 . 5/3/2006
nice.. so few words yet so clear thoughts.. good choice of words..
ChasingPerfection chapter 1 . 4/12/2006
Now this is more of a traditional haiku! *smiles and nods approvingly* Took me two reads to understand it (at least I think I understand it...) (which is a hallmark of a good haiku, lol!) but the last line tips me off to a relationship, yes? let's see...i counted 8 in the second line but oh well, such is life. why i counted...the second line seems off to me somehow. like it's just not quite there yet. but perhaps it is exactly what you intended for it to be?
run rabbit run chapter 1 . 4/4/2006
nice. i read a relationship in it. cheers-rabbit
The Fourth Fate chapter 1 . 4/3/2006
Oo chilling. I love the way the sumary worked into this. Very very... different and creative. Bravo. I really love this piece (and I'm not just saying that. I totally agree. I hate when people say all that mushy stuff when they don't mean it.) . The Haiku format complimented what you were trying to get across which (I hope I intererpted this right) is that while "truth" seems short and simple, there's SO much more depth to it than anyone can begin to imagine. Well except for you since you're the poet and you get to be all knowing. Or at least all knowing for a little while. Great piece. Bravo.
MidnightStar005 chapter 1 . 4/3/2006
Wow! This is beautiful!

In other words you rock my socks off!


classic violet chapter 1 . 4/3/2006
Very pretty. The last line especially kind of reminded me of love, like a relationship of sorts.
Absynthe Greene chapter 1 . 4/2/2006
SeaVoi chapter 1 . 4/2/2006
this is really a good way to show how we tend to put two things together, it's cool.
Aquafied chapter 1 . 4/2/2006
reminds me of ghosts actuallybut maybe couples

yes couples.
Jason J. Ross chapter 1 . 4/2/2006
As a writer, you are very prolific. You've posted a lot of material recently and I enjoy your work. You have clearly put a lot of contemplation into your poetry. Keep it flowing and I look forward to more. Peace.
Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 4/1/2006
Lovely and abstract. Good haiku.
Matthew James Current chapter 1 . 4/1/2006
Interesting and thought provoking. But as a philosopher might I throw a curveball your way? Truth is something I study with all my heart, it is my passion and obsession. And the nature of truth is complex in its simplicity. Just as the human mind can perceive everything (arguably given time and if our ability reason is sound, a different conversation naturally) so can it limit its own perceptions. We can keep truth a captive in the cage of our minds, training it and making it do tricks for us. Or we can let it run wild and free and appreciate it for what it is. Does truth truly collide, or do our perceptions of truth collide? There is indeed a difference between discovering a truth and then wrapping it in our own opinions, and discovering a truth and leaving it untainted and clear. Truth can be both interpreted logically and skewed psychologically.

Think on that and please keep on writing. _