Reviews for Weak, not Strong
jointedlegs chapter 1 . 9/29/2006
"To feel the sorrow, the pain, knowing that you killed him,Killed you inside."

I like the last stanza again :) A bit too much prose-like I find, but nonetheless i was completely sucked into the story. You held me there.
Suicidal Butterfly chapter 1 . 5/14/2006
A boy I went to school with commited suicide. No one cared. They chatted aimlessly about the sandwitch molding in his locker. -Enjoyed the poem very emotional and discriptive. I felt like I was that person.