Reviews for Light and Eyes
Athetemis chapter 1 . 4/2/2006
Nice. I would just like to mention that in Roman poetry, when poets such as Virgil wrote the word for light it meant eyes in context. So there is a very strong connection there that you might be able to use somehow. I like the image of the forge as well.
feita do fogo chapter 1 . 4/2/2006
this made my heart race