Reviews for Stay
Lovetress chapter 1 . 4/10/2006
I loved this poem. The shortness of it was brilliant, and the poem itself is bittersweet. Each line is like an etch mark through my heart, but in a good way. lol
My New Pen Name chapter 1 . 4/7/2006
Chilling. Beautiful. Nicely done!
BellonaFlayreRiver chapter 1 . 4/4/2006
i can feel that there is something really really important you want to say, but you seem to say everything but it at the same time. great wording though, with good thought process. lovely.
Ellin Louise chapter 1 . 4/4/2006
Lovely flow.
nofaceme chapter 1 . 4/3/2006
I like the title..favorite line has to be: A salty pearl of sadness,

pretty...I liked it. Keep it up!
Random-Idiocity chapter 1 . 4/2/2006
hmm well so far the title seems to be ok as far as that goes, but the poem is very good.. Keep it Up!