|Reviews for Familiar Fears|
| Dawn's-End chapter 1 . 7/18/2006
I finally got around to reviewing this.
I very much like the internal rhyme and repitition. It reminds me very much of Poe's style (which, if you're wondering, is an immense compliment).
The content isn't as bad as you suggest in your summary. In fact, I like what the poem is about almost as much as I like what you did with the form. Like always, there are several particularly salient lines, but none are weak.
The only thing that you might want to fix is the rhythm on some lines... it's not that distracting, but it's not perfect
| RestlessPassion chapter 1 . 5/12/2006
I'm too lazy to log in! :0) This poem is fantastic! I'm surprised I'm the first person to review on it. You have very good flow and I like this unique rhyme scheme; not something you see very often. Keep up the great work! :0)