|Reviews for 08 Perpetual Sleep|
| Vexed and Tired chapter 1 . 11/3/2006
Thanks for the message. Your stuff seems pretty deep and meaningful, it has a very honest quality about it. I like the bit where it goes "the glass isn't polished...take a stab/at a stab in the dark" It make you wonder who's doing the stabbing, the glass or you. Some of your lines seem abrupt and sort-of abstract like the "Take a stab" one. The other lines seem to meander around until that line jolts you back into reality.