i really liked it. It made me think.

Loved it! Simple, short, yet just...wonderful. Well done!

For a minute I thought that David was going to get together with Sarah, but it is nice that she realize what had happened and that she really did miss Andrew.

Love the story!

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This is so beautiful..!

And the way Sarah says 'his eyes' in the end...just made me smile for some unknown reason..! :)

Short and sweet..!

Wow, another neat little twist in the end! I mean, once you start reading, you get to thinking that Sarah and David will end up together (as stories like these usually go), but then in the end, they don't. The ending's still sweet though! Totally sweet...

And the way you described the way Sarah reacted towards the newly reunited couple seemed as if she was disappointed that they got back together when really, David just reminded her of her true love. Am I right? Ah well, I'm glad all is well in the end. :D

xoxo, Amber

that was a really good one-shot. I liked the fact that it wasnt predictable in that sarah and David didn't end up together and that when David got back with his old girl friend it wasn't the end of the road for Sarah. Der getting back up and calling Andrew was really great. she's lucky he's so forgiving. great story.

M, it was cute, but it just annoyed me that she suddenly decides she wants to get back together with the ex, it comes off as her being jealous of the other guy because he reconciled with his girlfriend...

I'm not quite sure how to state this, so I'll just come out with it. The way you set everything up was Sarah/David. If you added into the conversation of them talking about their relationships and how sad they were, it would have made more sense in David getting back with his girlfriend and Sarah with her fiance. With how you ended it, it was very empty since there was no set up. I understand what you meant with the "making your own happiness" theme, but the minimal amount of details you put in made it...I can't think of a word, but somewhere between hazy and meaning less.

Basically, how you set everything up was Sarah amd David when you obviously didn't intend that to happen, so when the end came, it lacked.

This a such a sweet story. I like how I was fooled at the end. ) Great stuff.

aw...I thought she was going to get together with David...once again...you've fooled us :P

I love it

aww i kinda wanted sarah n david to get together lol. good story

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Really good idea. It had a great twist ending.

Whoa! This was uber cute and very sweet. I really liked the plotline.

That was a nice oneshot, something I would never be able to do. I feel sorry for her, but I'm stupid, it's weird how I feel for characters. But I guess that's how it should be to truly enjoy stories. Anyway, now that I spilled my whole life story, I just wanted to say that this oneshot was bitter sweet. It was perfect. Hope you write more!

Not what I expected at the end, but I loved this. I wish I could whip up amazing one shots like this :o] Great job.