|Reviews for wish|
| Nemonus chapter 1 . 4/5/2006
AW! I love it! Such good words, and all the folding and dripping can be seen-very Daliesque-the last line is awesome. Only the line "seeping in black holes & celestial planets" 's nouns seemed too typical for your otherwise innovating words. Of course planets are celestial...:) Great job.
| Aquafied chapter 1 . 4/4/2006
i feel a trend with you and your starsand many things are dripping
we could all moving to pouringand watch the rain
| breezy nostrils chapter 1 . 4/4/2006
wow just impressive. i think this is my favourite poem of yours so far. nice work.
| MidnightStar005 chapter 1 . 4/4/2006
Wow! This is so beautiful!
| Smoky Bear chapter 1 . 4/4/2006
enduring, delectable imagery. this is a fabulous poem... beautiful work.