Reviews for The Ten Commandments
Squirrel With a Chainsaw chapter 1 . 4/17/2006

It's been awhile since I saw poetry that made me giggle instead of simply blink and go 'Buh?'. Vairy goot job j00 hath done here.
shelina chapter 1 . 4/14/2006
XD omg this is so funny! ahaha
SomeoneStoleSatan chapter 1 . 4/6/2006
Alchy chapter 1 . 4/6/2006
LOL That's a good one. I'm impressed with your poetic skills as well as your writing skills.

*swipes for personal use*

I'm giving you full credit
A. Cox chapter 1 . 4/6/2006
eh! I love it! :D It's hilarious!
Myufisian chapter 1 . 4/5/2006
Lol! That is the funniest thing I've probably ever heard in my life.
Traea chapter 1 . 4/4/2006
No one's going to smite you.

Very funny little poem. I saw some forced rhymes but that's OK for a something like this. I liked your view of God. :P