Reviews for Flying
ChasingPerfection chapter 1 . 4/12/2006
I LOVE the "wind singing with seeds soaring" line! great alliteration as well as a wonderfully free and universal image! *is jealous of the fantastic line*
classic violet chapter 1 . 4/10/2006
Simple yet so beautiful.
Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 4/5/2006
I like the movement in this, kind of like freedom and renewel. Well done.
Annabell Lee chapter 1 . 4/5/2006
I find this beautifully simple.
ygg chapter 1 . 4/5/2006
I really like the personifications in this beautiful Haiku. Singing winds and calling skies.. makes me want to fly away.. :) Excellent!
Aquafied chapter 1 . 4/4/2006
ripping clear of the shell of winteri have to love it

all these spring poems
SeaVoi chapter 1 . 4/4/2006
"seeds soaring" wonderful words! I heart this haiku.
MallowsWins chapter 1 . 4/4/2006
I take it Spring is in the air over the other side of the world, as this is the second Spring related haiku I've read today. I like it, though, it creates images as well as sounds poetic. Not an easy thing to do (well). Good job.

Peace, Daze
Jason J. Ross chapter 1 . 4/4/2006
Well-written. Good use of alliteration.
sirius chatham chapter 1 . 4/4/2006
this is a wonderfully short, simple, and concise poem. i like it very much; it gives such a lovely, fleeting image.

sirius chathamps r/r my work too