That was beautiful. You used wonderful imagary and painted a very clear picture in this reader's mind. Excellent!

Beautiful image. Thanks for noticing. Well done.

I like how you describe the flower as brave. gives it a certain character it would have lacked as just a poem about a flower on a tree. *claps* rosy-pink is fairly cliche by now but it doesn't detract from the poem so i didn't mind for once. oh, and i also like the "life-giving color" at the end

Aw. I really like this. So...cute? I don't know. It made me smile.

Very pretty. Fantastic description.

ha! this is fabulous with the word-brush amd the paper-canvas. i could see it, the petaled commander, rallying strong. i've never had such a clear picture of fearless flowers before. a great symbolic work. great leaders lead to greatness. you are one of them. :)

love, .

brave and lovelyagainst the rain

we all stand up

Its the small details :) I think giving this the title of "Bravest" was a nice touch; an interesting way of looking at that first flower in bloom.