Reviews for Hope
For What Its Worth chapter 1 . 4/15/2006
okay. a statement short and compact. not half bad. (it is an essay, right?)
ChasingPerfection chapter 1 . 4/12/2006
aw...i was reading through and was all tense like "why is she so worried and tortured the poor thing?" Then I understood about her love but it didn't make me less tense...until I read "and the size of her thighs". instantly i cracked up (and at the same time understood exactly!) and relaxed...until i started reading and was kinda half tense, half relaxed. Basically what I'm saying is nice honest comic relief with the thighs comment and I feel as if this made me feel the way she was feeling - tense, with momentary relaxation, and then a rising sort of odd relaxed tenseness again. I must bow to you for this...*bows until her head hits the floor* amazing job with the emotional cycle thing girly!
Chaotic0ne chapter 1 . 4/12/2006
I like the imagery that this short story presents. I think you should expand this one- make it a bit longer! See where it takes you!

Chemically Induced chapter 1 . 4/10/2006
ah lovely. i enjoyed this and its hopeful, determined ending. i know exactly how she feels. the description is keen, and wields the word-brush to paint the prose-picture masterfully. "restful for moments, tense for hours." is a great phrase. idk if this is goign to continue on, this story, but if it does, ill be there reading it. :) well done.

love, .
Yuval chapter 1 . 4/8/2006
Beautiful characterisation. It was short, but - to use a cliche - it was sweet. :D It was also admirable in its creation of empathy in the space of some 300 words.

...that's all I have to say. (flees)
xFaeriexofxLustx chapter 1 . 4/6/2006
First of all, I'd like to thank you for reviewing my story. Made my day.

This little story is so sweet! I think I'll put it on mah favorites. All your work is wonderful, I can't wait to read more of it.

Aquafied chapter 1 . 4/4/2006
about college, her job, and the size of her thighs.-ahh, reminds me of my friend

and really blends with HIM