Reviews for Waiting
Pheobe Meryll chapter 1 . 5/8/2006
Again, the last few lines really struck me...kind of a looming darkness after that pretty floating love song. Very beautiful use of descriptives again. Reminded me of an old-fashioned love poem. sweet.
iamthe-loris chapter 1 . 4/16/2006
wonderful style, another brilliant poem. i very much enjoy your work.

JagerCloud chapter 1 . 4/11/2006

Boots of Press chapter 1 . 4/7/2006
All I can say is SUPER YAY I loved it. The imgaery, the repition (in a good way, and the tone shifting from blissful to hopeful to a twinge of sadness. Definitely a favorite author definitely a favorite poem.-Press
Kat-Renee Kittel chapter 1 . 4/5/2006
This would make good song lyrics...

Dreamily beautiful.

I Found Myself At 24 chapter 1 . 4/5/2006
It's fun to try out new stlyles and all and I think you did a good job with this one. I prefer your normal style to be honest, but that's not to say this wasn't good. *shrugs* Not too sure I understand the last line eihter... Your typo or my misunderstanding?
xoxoMizzatxoxo chapter 1 . 4/5/2006
Woah. This is amazing. I love the way that you di Y
karone-sakura chapter 1 . 4/4/2006
Very nice poem. Very different. Its always good to do different every once in a while.
Needa S chapter 1 . 4/4/2006
Great flow, nicely done.
Elizabeth Bilberry chapter 1 . 4/4/2006
This poem is just lovely, with its short lines and beautiful language. Take care and keep writing.

EWindheim chapter 1 . 4/4/2006
Beautiful darling. You do well with this style. Wonderful to see you writing again. Keep it up!