Reviews for Newtseye Academy: Place of Darkness |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I am mad at you right now because just as it is getting goodyou stop writing don't do this. Update soon. Please. :) |
![]() ![]() Update soon please :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() this story is freakin awesome, dude. cmon update! i would love to see (or rather, read) what Rilie can do. Her powers and all. How is she gonna rescue Bade? is she gonna fight Isabel? What about the war? gosh, update please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Update soon! I can't wait any longer! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is REALY GOOD! please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() awesome story line! I've read the whole story in about three hours, and already I can't wait until the end. In ch 13, the first paragraph has 'before Mrs. Jefferson' 2x in a row, and you have the occasional spelling errors throughout the chapters, but other than that, keep up the good work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() when are you going to come out with the next chapter of newtseys? well when ever you do i will be waiting. i LOVE the story. _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() It sounds like you have their world pretty planned out, and that's good. just make sure you don't get confused about the plot, if you do, we all do. |
![]() ![]() its a really good story but things need to move along a bit because the story is quite slow but nice all the same so yeah id really like to see what the people have planned for the opposing team. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awsome story! Keep goin! lol and b quick bout it. Im being so impatient here. lol hey i have a suggestion. Try not to make all vampires bad. Iv been reading a lot of vampire stories adn they are so cute if their good. Here's a few stories to get a tip from. theres "Hybrid Vampire" and "Hunting the Moon" which are in the "supernatural", rating all, length all section. And read "Peeps" and "Twilight". All r about good vampires. The guy vamps are so cute and twilight is so sweet. anyway keep going wid the story. Its going great! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I found this interesting. I'm looking forward to reading a little more on it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love the new Newtseye! its so good. im glad that you finally updated to. im looking forward to the next one _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() o i like chp 10. i have a feeling that the school is going to split and fight against eachother. im REALLY looking forward to to the next chapter of Newtseye Academy. _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() yay! Harley didnt get her! and im hoping he never does. hes an ass. keep up the good work. I love this story. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this story...it's interesting. I'll try to update mine soon. |