Reviews for the simple what ifs
Annaece's Forsaken Corpse chapter 1 . 4/8/2006
I've watched the whole thing several times, I got real emotion and that's not like me. I don't like to cry. Anyway love this piece and the format. I love read your stuff and I always print off and ppl are like why do you like this and it's b/c I understand it.
Moon-Chaser chapter 1 . 4/5/2006
This is so very close to a situation that I am in now. The whole feel of this poem is so strong. I love the way that you have set this out and I like the ending of the poem.

Keep it up.
Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 4/4/2006
Personally I really liked the format - it added a solid shape to your narration which I think added so much. All of the tiny details like about the razors and the letters were so powerful to create this huge greater picture - not to mention to depth of the writing - your narration is strong as well as heartbreaking and the tone of the questioning protagonist really drew me in, a very well constructed masterpiece, keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.