|Reviews for My life as is|
| A. J. L chapter 1 . 5/30/2006
Nice! I can totally relate. There's always that hope that things will get more exciting, eh?
| Zure chapter 3 . 4/23/2006
Hmn, really cool...you should google "a softer world" if you haven't heard of it before. Your poems remind me of the guys writing
| multiples of six chapter 4 . 4/7/2006
Yeah, I like all of these. I think my favourite might be #3 or #4 though. Nice job. )
| multiples of six chapter 2 . 4/7/2006
Wow, I love the third-last line.
| coal and marigolds chapter 1 . 4/4/2006
Simple, but it was a nice read nonetheless. )
| chaos called creation chapter 1 . 4/4/2006
This flows very nice. I think you could make the ending better, a more big of an impact but good poem overall.
| Devil-In-The-Wishing-Well chapter 1 . 4/4/2006
I KNOW HOW YOU FEEL...life can be boring sometimes. But we all need to hang in there. ...ditww
| Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 4/4/2006
I didn't really like it until the end - I think it's in finding the "meaning" in the little things that often times make the best poems. Very interesting perspective though, keep up the good work.