Reviews for Unraveled
Amanda Drowry chapter 1 . 1/30/2007
Keep writing Talon! You speak the truth that so many are scared to, and that others cannot find the proper words to voice.
Chandra-Moon chapter 1 . 6/17/2006
You are very philosophical in your poems, and I like it. I think sometimes, though, they feel a bit tiring, when the same sentence structure is used over and over, so maybe try mixing it up a bit? Repetition and parallelism are great, but you can have too much.
Luma chapter 1 . 5/18/2006
Wow, so much wisdom. I really like how you've tied the poem together - it's amazingly well done. Keep it up.

-Luma
The Postscript chapter 1 . 4/5/2006
Good wisdom, I like all the aspects in this - and I would have hated this had you not tied them all together as well. Great job with that...I dislike writers who try to do too much with a certian piece but this was wonderful. Keep it up, s.