Reviews for Difference
Chemically Induced chapter 1 . 4/5/2006
at times, this poem, as someone put it, 'borders on the cheese.' but seriously, there are some of the greatest fpress lines in this ive ever read. 'you cant tell me you've never sought/to be something with me. that almost made my cry. and i never cry. 'what hearts can mean and what hearts can sow' is the best use of the cliche symbolic heart ever. i love it, absolutely. and you're last three lines bring down the house. i could hear the speaker say it, with those hot tears burning trails down his cheeks. great work!

love, .