This shit wad cute as hell.

I kept picturing Garren as the run-down brother. I was always waiting for the tables to turn and Wyatt to run to Axel, Garren taking the pain. I'm glad it didn't, for Garrens sake, but I never really appreciated him as a character. The relationship never felt developed, it mostly felt stressed, until the last couple chapters. I also wondered why Wyatt didn't just drop out of school and get his GED. It would get him more working time, although less drug hours, and more hours with mother.
All in all, this was very good.
~ibbit

Very good, realistic emotions portrayed well-im usually not a huge fan of reality in my books/stories but it was effecting-so nuts, i have paid for m/m fiction that sucks stinky ass , yet this is free-hope u get paid for it now or in the future!

Good

I finished your story few days ago but didn't take the time to review it. I really like it, the relationship between Wyatt and Garon, they're really sweet together and i love the beginning of their love story, the "come on let's fuck", it was refreshing and so natural.
thanks for this story!

I'm so confused, there seems to be so much left unsaid. MORE! I loved this story/ :)

Thanks for this hard story :)

***Pyrane***

Even though you're probably long gone I don't believe it's fair to read a story without giving the author an opinion so wow! I loved your story so much your characters were brilliant :D I hope you confined writing id buy your stuff for sure (:

I really, really loved this story I loved the characters, their realness, their awkwardness, Wyatt's self-destructive tendencies, the sweet tension between him and Axel, how the plot didn't seem forced and just kinda rolled.

Haha that was kinda gushy, but this was great.

Suki .

Omg u r such an amazing writing I thought u were goin to make it cheesy and pair him with axel

SEQUEL!

A good story, which pretty much goes without saying for you. However, I can say this is the only one of your longer stories that really holds itself together the whole way. Step-brothers, My Perfect Uncle, and other stories really give me the sense that the short, self-contained story is you métier, and anything else puts you out of your depth. But ‘Wyatt’ manages to keep it’s narrative interest and intensity along with a plot that satisfying threads the whole together. I’m eternally envious of your skills with realizing situations which are as awkward and real as they are erotic and fantastic, and creating powerful moods which permeate all of the best of your work.

What I enjoy most about ‘Wyatt’ is the awkwardness, the painfulness. They really add a lot to the story. I think someday, maybe long after you’ve left Fiction Press behind, you could write powerful stories of human existence, be a literary short story writer in the vein of Alice Munro, Eudora Welty, and Katherine Anne Porter. I mean, I’m just speculating at random, but you have deep wells of talent to match your artistic vision.

cool story

that was great! i finish all of this today! from beginning to the end. i thought that the story is going to collapse with the fight between wyatt, garron and axel. but you finish it. i love how your characters seems to be real! the angst, drama and humor in this story with romance is so refreshing to read! i read a lot of mxm but thus story kills! its awesome. especially the the you just ended it! im a closet yaoi fan. i cant declare to the world that i like it. i am NOT ashamed! i just worry about my position in my point is, love yah!

I enjoyed the epilogue. Sometimes people paste mushy/fluffy epilogues at the end of stories like Wyatt, and that's just wrong. But this was perfect, a fitting end to Wyatt.

Have I ever mentioned just how much I enjoy your A/N's? They always make me chuckle.

And then I read this and remembered I still owed you that fanfic of the three of them.

And now I'm remembering that your birthday has snuck up on me.

And I'm going to remind you that this thing needs finished so I can read how awesome it is and you can bind it up and stick a fancy cover on it.

You could use the cover I used on the book I sent you last year :D