| Reviews for My Sanctuary |
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   punktunit chapter 1 . 4/12/2006 i love this one!:p |
| Cawfee chapter 1 . 4/6/2006 second stanza was ment to say land instead of stand . got messed up typing it up |
| chaos called creation chapter 1 . 4/6/2006 Explosive ending. Me like :) I think you need to work on the rhyming in the second stanza to polish it up a bit but besides that... this was well written. |
| Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 4/6/2006 She walks light,the way my dreams told me she would.I hold her tight,the way my dreams said I could. I love the mood that (that) and this whole poem creates; it's so tender and abstractly simple. I was mesmerized by your style, I really enjoyed, keep up the good work. Much love,Juliet. |