Reviews for My Sanctuary
punktunit chapter 1 . 4/12/2006
i love this one!:p
Cawfee chapter 1 . 4/6/2006
second stanza was ment to say land instead of stand . got messed up typing it up
chaos called creation chapter 1 . 4/6/2006
Explosive ending. Me like :) I think you need to work on the rhyming in the second stanza to polish it up a bit but besides that... this was well written.
Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 4/6/2006
She walks light,the way my dreams told me she would.I hold her tight,the way my dreams said I could.

I love the mood that (that) and this whole poem creates; it's so tender and abstractly simple. I was mesmerized by your style, I really enjoyed, keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.