Reviews for The Witch's Paramour
Kristina Suko chapter 1 . 9/10/2006
Beautiful story. That's all I can say.

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amenokodomo chapter 1 . 8/10/2006
Wow... you don't see poetry like this very often. Awesome job!
White is a Sin chapter 1 . 7/19/2006
*wipes off beads of sweat* Wow that was pretty long! Though long it's still really good, you're a talented writer! Nice detail and use of vocabulary. _ *Applaudes* Do you think you'll write more poetry? I wouldn't mind reading it at all.
bahaghari chapter 1 . 4/20/2006
Wow, nice rhyming scheme. Not boring.
Randomisation chapter 1 . 4/13/2006
wo0w! this is amazing! i luv this so much!
SeaVoi chapter 1 . 4/11/2006
You have selected some very good words here, plus the page breaks separate your thoughts it’s kind of cool.
bleed gilead chapter 1 . 4/7/2006
fantastic word choice and pacing, love how much attention you pay to detail.
run rabbit run chapter 1 . 4/7/2006
uh... gee... i dunno what happened but i swear i just read and reviewed this... anyway... i will just repeat what i had said in the other one... *stands and applauds* i love it. great descriptions and wonderful vignette. really nice work. cheers-rabbit
Frore chapter 1 . 4/7/2006
Ha! I'm reviewing your story under your penname! Well, anyway,this s a really awesome poem. It really portrays the anguish of losing a lover and your to the fires of insufferble paranoid morons. Keep up the writing of which I am so -Jen
Coralollie chapter 1 . 4/7/2006
wow, the way you've written this is amazing! keep up the awsumness _~cozza
Dante's Disciple chapter 1 . 4/6/2006
Wow! That was incredible! The story was great of course but I loved the way that not only did you finsih every second line with a rhyme which is sometimes a challenge in itself, but all you have words rhyming within each line to allowing for the perfect flow to the whole piece. As for the ending- well tragic endings are usualy the most memorable anyway :) Anyway, excellent work, more like this please! :)
Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 4/6/2006
I loved the detail and storytelling in this. Well done.