What an interesting idea! What about further chapters?

Ah!

Okay, this is written quite well. And since you left it off at that...uh, moment, you should update soon!

The way you tell about their history is a little bit hard to struggle through, for me, so maybe you could reword it so it seems more like a story and less like a lesson? (School. Ugh. Lessons. Blah.)

o this is REAllY good. but how come amy's brothetr says Ah 4 i but amy dosnt?/? i was just wondering! keep it up and thanx 4 the review!

So do they speak english? If so, how? And they just all of the sudden over took the colonies? So are the colonies not colonies anymore? Or do they still belong to the King? Or did the colonies just not exist, and it was just a random band of white folk that felt like coming and setting up a town?

You still need to think about it, and work out the kinks.

Well, there's a bit of a problem. Slaves didn't talk that way because they felt like it, they talked that way because they weren't allowed to learn proper grammer and everything. White slaves would be just the same. We don't have different IQs, just some of us are treated better. :3

You might also want to reconsider a few things. What if the whites were taken from America to Africa? :3 That might make it a bit more interesting. They would feel the same way- confused, not knowing the language and their surroundings. It's just another aspect to think about. And there were very, very few girls that spoke out, especially ones that had slaves themselves.