Reviews for Forcing
rust phoenix chapter 1 . 11/3/2006
I like this poem, you describe this situation so well. You have some very deep lines in here, especially the last two.
Writing Beauty chapter 1 . 8/2/2006
I like this and i can kind of related. I'm a people pleaser, I hate it but I can't stop myslef from being it. keep writing!
Ashelin chapter 1 . 4/11/2006
Good job, I really love the ending "Force is lost, Or so I hope"I have been reading your poetry, and it is really good. Maybe you could review one of mine (wink wink, hint hint). I like this one a lot though, I am not personally a people pleaser (more like a people not pleaser), but I know people who are. Good job, (again), keep writing. God bless.
Arisnoe chapter 1 . 4/7/2006
"I'm a people pleaser"

one line that totally sums up how i am. it's bad i know. well, another amazing poem!