Reviews for He Chain Smokes
Olivine chapter 1 . 4/8/2006
hm... you deleted all your stories? well, now i dont know if youre the one whos short stories i like. are you? cuz i dont remember.

anyways, i liked this one. the speakers voice really showed her personality when she said 'stay tuned next week kiddies' and even when shes talking about how she loves him. but good job.

you had only a few typos. the one i remember is you meant 'than' instead of 'then'. sentence structure was fine, and detail was awesome.

keep on writing ~~Wintertigress-::-
Bowl of Oranges chapter 1 . 4/8/2006
I like it. ] It's very expressive and I can actually feel the hatred. You truly understand the feelings of the narattor. It actually reminds me of that 'Flavor of the Week' song by American Hi-Fi, but your story's the girl version.
C. Fitzsimmons chapter 1 . 4/7/2006
Nicely written. The opening line is really catching and I really like the writing. You really get a feel for the narrator.