Reviews for The one |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, that's sad. I especially like "the one I loved, the one I hated, the one I took, the one I baited". I like how you play with opposites. And also, I hastily added you on my msn in a impulsive attempt to discuss history with you. Just so you know. ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() understood that one. sad, but well written. one thing, though, you said it was because of a fight between lovers, but didn't really make it clear as to why the one died... unless it was meant to be unclear? i dont know, its 3 am and if im absolutley wrong about everything, im sorry. :) he yay yeah. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Heartfelt and well-detailed; you have strong convictions in your narration. Keep up the good work. Much love,Juliet. |