Reviews for Deus
KingdomRain chapter 1 . 4/24/2006
i got to say i like this poem the most! why? i dont know... mabey because it's just really good {:
NO LONGER USING chapter 1 . 4/13/2006
This poem was an angry poem..I take it since you're an atheist, you believe that if there was a God, then he is to blame for all the trouble in the world...am I correct?anyway this showed your emotions well, but I can't agree with everything in this, see as I am a Christian and I believe, that yes bad even horrible things do happen in this world, but that is because God gave us free will, and we as sinners abuse this privelage everyday...God really isn't the one to blame...we are...but anyway great poem...keep it up

Lacy
Ashelin chapter 1 . 4/11/2006
You were right, this is an angry poem. I don' know if I'm brave, or stupid, but I always have to put up my two cents. Man, sometimes I really dislike myself. Why do hate us? I wrote a poem bout this, called "Why do you hate us?", amazing, huh? I am Christian, and I must assume that is who you are talking bout. Is it because you think we're evil. Or because we have rules? Or because all of us sin, but you still think we think we're perfect? I don't know anymore. I keep on asking "why?", but I don't get an answer. And one more question. Do you think God gave us freewill? I do, that is why people get murdered, hurt, all because of sin. Its not Gods fault.