I love this peom it was the truth of life and the way things go. Also I liked the way it is set on the page.

cool...i already reviewed but who cares...

I LOVE your peotry. Your stories may be screwed but...MY GOD...The poetry!

Ach, if I had my choice of what to do after I died then Death certainly would be bliss! All I know is I'll fight the good fight till I'm dead and then if I get a choice I'll spend several thousand years in my own personal paradise, but hey, I don't think we can look forward to that much til we're dead eh? Reis'Dem'Naca and Bravo! _~

its different... and sad! The one thing I didn't like was the lack of rhythm, but different authors do different things ;)