Reviews for Fire Pleiades
WormsofCharacter chapter 1 . 4/11/2006
It can be very difficult to make a poem with strict structure guidelines sound good, but this one flows beautifully. The last two lines sound quite powerful.
SimplySydney chapter 1 . 4/9/2006
Ooh, love the whole 7 lines 6 syllables thing going on, and how each line starts with F. Very creative. My favorite lines are 'Fuel their destiny' and 'Flames of red tongues reach out'. Great job!