Reviews for Explanation
Rubyme chapter 1 . 4/11/2006
Interesting... Speaking of a girl trapped in a place so dull and worn out that the only thing she can go to for fun is sex, drugs, and alcohol?

Thats my take on it at least... same with recording impolsions.
Ellin Louise chapter 1 . 4/9/2006
I love the way you have made beauty into something that can be calculated... to the point where it no longer seems beautiful. Then from about half way through you start to make life, and goals, into this same formular. If that makes sense... good work, great poem. I'll be reading more of your stuff later.