Reviews for The Annals of Aadsenfeloth: Prelude
gonegone chapter 4 . 4/10/2006
Fantastic read and I do hope you continue with this series.

I admit, it is a tiny bit confusing at times with all the different names and dynasties. Once getting used to the format it isn't boring at all.

wanting to read more,

gonegone chapter 2 . 4/10/2006
I am suddenly remembering the days of School History lessons lol You have clearly studied Ancient/Modern civilisations and goverment evolution to create an entire history that could almost be real.

Very original in my opinion - onto chapter 2

gonegone chapter 1 . 4/10/2006
I like the format, it's similar to Andrew Lang's tellings of Ancient Greece which I dug up and read a few months ago, therefore I'm used to it.

The prologue sets the tone of the textbook-like history quite well, and your grammer is fantastic.

It's hooked me, so I'll just shut up and continue reading.