Reviews for Deliverance
LittleTaintedOne chapter 1 . 6/7/2006
Gee, I think I know whom this is about. It is a very beautiful and well written poetic work. Go Mimi!
LateDawnsAndEarlySunsets chapter 1 . 4/28/2006
Very beautiful and touching. I have to work on those aspects in my writing, lol. Good job.
Mosaic Stains chapter 1 . 4/17/2006
The sentimental side of the poem is touching, in a guiding...searching without light kind of hopeful way.
MusicallyBrainwashed chapter 1 . 4/12/2006
I like the poem. Very nice.

Oh, about the poem I wrote. Metal IS an element. So is Spirit, but Spirit is a secondary element... or so said the Chinese during my research for the five elements.