|Reviews for On My Ceiling|
| Gabi chapter 1 . 8/31/2006
i am not sure if i ever reviewed this one for you but i love it and it's probably one of my favorites... :)
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 8/9/2006
interesting descriptions... well done.. tahnks for your review
| poetic abortion chapter 1 . 7/21/2006
Beautiful, lovely, and so fricken' beautiful.
| PurpleFalcon chapter 2 . 7/21/2006
Wow. I don't really like religious stuff pushing it's ugly head to me, but I like both your poems here.
| Gabi chapter 1 . 7/7/2006
wow..this is probably one of the most amazing things i've ever read.
| Killing Karma chapter 1 . 5/27/2006
Oddly enough, when I saw the summary for this poem, I instantly thought about blowing it off, because I'm not religious at all, and the thought of God seems to repulse me. But I gave it a try,and I found that I like this poem a lot. It's very well written, quite metaphorical, if you ask me.. and it contains a lot of imagery, with a large message.
Great work. I'm looking out for more of your stuff.
| LadyRainStarDragon chapter 1 . 4/17/2006
Long time no read. Sorry.
This poem strikes some really strong images. Myself, I've always been creeped out looking at a guy hanging on a cross, and for some reason it kept bringing the image up.
| sunday night sky chapter 1 . 4/15/2006
this is an amazing image to portray - very original, and i can really imagine it... wonderful work.
| Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 4/10/2006
I like the idea that he can't escape what he's created - like he made us so vulnerable and fucked up and now he has to face the fact that none of us are angels. Well said. Keep up the good work.
| hey maria chapter 1 . 4/10/2006
"Crank high anorexic whore/of a God/begging/for/release"
Love the length of this; it's short, yes, but the reason it's so powerful is because it's so concise. Great imagery too, especially in the first stanza. Great job.
| diffident chapter 1 . 4/10/2006
A very unique and rare perspective... I adore this. Magnificent. I find it ironic how, though God is "all skin and bones / Broken and bleeding / all alone" and a "crank high anorexic whore", you still maintain that his name and pronoun be capitalized. Interesting & extremely intriguing.
| fairEtales chapter 1 . 4/10/2006
Wow...depressing, but wonderful imagery. I really loved it.