Reviews for Later!
empty-spiral chapter 1 . 6/3/2006
wow. i feel dense. what did she want? maybe im just sheltered or something... dunno.
Widom chapter 1 . 5/2/2006
Oh...(wince) Very expressive and descriptive, my dear. I like it, and I can't help but think this deserves a story...
Starrlena chapter 1 . 4/20/2006
This is pretty good. For some reason it reads more like a poem to me. Of course that could just be me. i thought the story had really good rhythm and I could really here the character.