Reviews for Later! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() wow. i feel dense. what did she want? maybe im just sheltered or something... dunno. |
![]() ![]() Oh...(wince) Very expressive and descriptive, my dear. I like it, and I can't help but think this deserves a story... |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is pretty good. For some reason it reads more like a poem to me. Of course that could just be me. i thought the story had really good rhythm and I could really here the character. |