Reviews for Freshly
Nemonus chapter 1 . 1/1/2007
Junk indeed, because it is just a moment, but you know what you get a bit of characterization in here. I think that being able to describe real people you see (and make them interesting) is a talent that writers should try to cultivate. One could make exercizes out of it.

I clicked this because there is something so simple true about the description "the cool man". I use it; I've say "the cool guy".

Yeah, this piece is just admiration.
die kleine maus chapter 1 . 5/19/2006
lol, you tell this so well, that he's very definitely "the cool man". it's funny, and intriguing, and brilliant with description.
ronshaberry chapter 1 . 4/10/2006
Breezy and light, I like it. Wonderful, poetic, magnificent! You come up with the greatest stuff.
Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 4/10/2006
Wonderfully interesting in pace and description. Like a snapshot of humanity. Well written, the tone of this enhances the overall work well.
Aquafied chapter 1 . 4/10/2006
ah, that reminds me, i got some wicked sunglasses this weekend, at ehem, a that is very coincidental, i swear, this place is a throng of

but i saw a nice looking boy in a department store. a bit old though, nice in a suit.

and i saw some wicked hair, it probably makes my day.

by the way, i like the poem, hah, i am getting all caught up in brea