Reviews for Confessions of
Halcyon Impulsion chapter 1 . 7/4/2006
Oh my. Perfectly profound until we hit the spaghettios :) My favorite parts? -I feel suddenly desperate (the octopus unleashed);

and craving more than sweet, aromatic leaves.-We are Vikings again, and the sea turned to night.
Sheets chapter 1 . 4/18/2006
"My intestines have forested into tangle"Amazing. I loved it.
coal and marigolds chapter 1 . 4/11/2006
I love how rambling and chaotic this poem is - it really sets a fabulous mood for what you're trying to describe. Great, original stuff.
ronshaberry chapter 1 . 4/10/2006
Funky and unfocused, it swings from one image to another. Nice.
Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 4/10/2006
This is so interestingly out there. So many random connections that seem to connect somehow when thrown together with such purpose. " I feel suddenly desperate(the octopus unleashed);" is just unspeakably marvelous. The whole lovely-strange congregation of words and phrases is lyrically gorgeous. A new favorite.
RedneckWoman chapter 1 . 4/10/2006
I really like this poem. Its really neat, and it shows you know how to write.

Keep up the good work. ~RedneckWoman
Aquafied chapter 1 . 4/10/2006

my sister was watching titanic today

oddly enough