Reviews for New Heaven |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, here's what you have to do. When you eventually build up enough strength, you need to stop being lazy, and post the next chapter! now!...::laughs:: I coudn't stop reading it. It was very good. I love it. It's really angsty and I could really feel what Tristan was going through. Well done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A very, very powerful start! |
![]() ![]() That was quite entriguing. I really wana know what happens next! And who IS that guy? what in the world happen? haha. trust me, i don't read often so i sound like a dumbass. |
![]() ![]() ![]() its wonderfulso full of emotion. |
![]() ![]() first of all, I would like to say that no matter what you think I LIKED THIS FIC AND BELIEVE IT TO BE VERY WELL WRITTEN! I noticed no mistakes at all, and...I've never been a beta before but I could always try~ you see, you're smart. you write a few chapters ahead before posting-while I normally write 'em as I go, posting them left and right...eventually ending up going back and rewriting everything. I don't know why I haven't thought of that before... hrm and I'm curious about Tristan and (did you ever mention his name? I think I might have missed it...crap) I can think of a few reasons why He might have left Tristan... and his sudden coming back is viewed as two ways (begging for forgiveness or just being guilty) but...are those two going to end up back together or not? Nah, don't answer, because I somehow doubt that. Tristan'll probably find this new and sexy guy to fall in love with, and lalalala~happy ending (don't ya just -love- those? ...yet un-happy endings are funny too :D) |
![]() ![]() ![]() That's depressing... I like it so far, so I'll be waiting for more! :D |