|Reviews for Porcelain Heart|
| Charmed.imsure-Always chapter 1 . 7/3/2007
I forgot how amazing you were at ending your poems! Every word had a sincere expression and I loved it. Porcelain was he perfect fragile metaphor. Very well done.
| lucretiabaine chapter 1 . 2/2/2007
This is a beautiful poem. It's so sad and cuts really deep, yet there's a kind of sweetness.
| Rozlin chapter 1 . 1/6/2007
Sometimes, you really have a way of paralleling your writing to shit happening with me... i think that may be why i've always liked it so much...
| Not Called Rose chapter 1 . 5/24/2006
Very nice. Touching, and very moving. I like the idea of a porcelain heart, and this is very well done. Thank you.
| Emmytastic gal chapter 1 . 5/17/2006
heyy... wow awesome work! I love it. the complexity yet simplicity of it all. Beautifully worded. Perfect ending.
| putz-6 chapter 1 . 5/17/2006
I loved this, you did an awsome job as always _
| Amethyst Eyed Cynical One chapter 1 . 5/13/2006
i love it! great writing as usual! i love the guarding the secrest bit.
| Ahemait chapter 1 . 5/9/2006
wow, this is beautiful. it sounds, to me, like a poem after a breakup. sorry if i'm takign this wrong. but if i'm right, i like the way you wrote it. mournful and beautiful, unlike most of the soppy breakup poems. i especially loved theses lines 'Mending the cracks and fixing the deep gashes,guarding the secrets that were her nightmare flashes' and the ending. great poem
| arcane devices chapter 1 . 5/5/2006
Ooh quite angsty... Great metaphor, and imagery. I look forward to your next piece. - ADD-san
| Kusje chapter 1 . 4/28/2006
Mm. I think that everybody living their lives has experienced something like this. I know I have..
Keep it up!
| frayedlifeforce chapter 1 . 4/28/2006
i liked the way you wrote this, and i really loved the last verse especially. the last line was very strong even if her heart was about to wonderful imagery in this.
| Herminia chapter 1 . 4/24/2006
I like your poem. I love the tone. It's so solemn, which makes it all the more better considering the suicidal/depressing topic. Great job. You described it beautifully.
I really liked this: "every drop fell across your palms,/staining,them with her painful memories"
| emilyrachel18 chapter 1 . 4/24/2006
Alex this must definately be the best poem you have written to date! I love the way you express the ending that her little heart is about to break i feel that way all the time. And the secrets that were her nightmare flashes? Where are you getting this from because it is excellant! I honestly think you should keep up your writing Alex because it speaks about your soul so clearly and by your words you are helping so many people. Keep it up!
| Moonjava chapter 1 . 4/18/2006
Amazing poem. I especially like the first stanza.
| Moon-Chaser chapter 1 . 4/17/2006
That was beautifully done, such emotions and the images that your words invoked.
Keep it up.